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Your vapor impact is good. You well caught the concept of my Line Art. I intended MLP : FIM and Starcraft 2' Mixed feeling; think you catch that sci-fi and fantasy feeling well.

Choice of color is good. It's look like one scene of animation. Good Work Aprilj0313. I knew you have problem but I also know most important thing in people is their heart. You have good heart and Passion. That's is reason why I give high point.

I think you can color better line art at some point. You can give shade at bottom of darkness. left side of two wire feels like suddenly pop in nowhere. I think you can give fade infect at end of wires. Simple but catch feeling; it is good.

It will be my Problem if picture have some wrong thing because orignal line art artist is me.